The weird stuff in her face is excellent! I'd say there's room for improvement with the DoF: The hair is very blurry in contrast to the branches coming out of her head. The depth is a bit inconsistent there. I think if the branches were as blurry as her hair the image would feel more as a whole. Also the thin hairs you've painted in stand out a little because they are much sharper.
Thanks man! I quite like the flower too, unfortunately it's about the only thing that worked in this . I decided to just remove the branches altogether as they weren't doing much for the image. They were a super last minute addition anyway.