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Submitted: January 26
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The Timid Queenby *AbbeyMarie

Digital Art / Photomanipulation / Fantasy

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I have been extremely unhappy with my last few pieces, but this one I am actually content with...for now.
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=mangasockattack Mar 15, 2013 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Hello! This is a very neat art piece. I really like the composition and the color scheme is very coherent. There are a couple things that I think seem off, but I may be incorrect. The first is her mask. The white shape is very definite, which I like, but I do have some problems with it. When crafting this piece, you could have either made it look like a mask, or make it look like it has been grafted to her skin. Right now, it is somewhere in between the two. The edges, especially on her nose, look like they should be blended at the edges or liquified or something to make it seem like it is a part of her face. My second problem is the blood drop on her chest. It seems like it is in an odd place. Lastly, the white electricity on her ears and hair seems off. Either there needs to be less of it or there needs to be more on the rest of her body, or at least her neck. Her eyes look very nice and the dress and crown are all very well placed. I also really like the pearls.I hope this helps!
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*AbbeyMarie Mar 15, 2013 Student Digital Artist

Thank you for the feedback! Her "mask" is more like face paint, for lack of a better term. And the "electricity" is actually just hair highlighted by the back lighting.